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跟着课本学写作,仿写课文最快乐

河北省承德县第一中学 梁世超老师

课本上的课文是数名专家学者、甚至几代人苦心孤诣、努力奉献的结果,因而与其背诵网络各种作文范文,不如精读课文、背诵课文。

以人教版2019必修一课本为例,我让学生把课文全篇背诵或背诵部分句子,一是形成语感,二是形成自己的语料库,再通过仿写、替换词等,提高写作水平,三是加深对语法、句式等的理解。

背诵课文好处多多,现将课本中的经典句子及根据课文进行的仿写展示给大家。

Welcome Unit

导语:

A thousand-mile journey begins with the first step.

千里之行,始于足下。

— Laozi

—— 老子

仿写

A success begins with a good beginning.

在这一单元,因为课文句型比较简单,所以我原创了一道作文题,要求学生将所学(特别是Reading and ThinkingReading for Writing中的句型)应用于写作中:

假定你是李华,刚进入高中学习,请你以My new life in senior high school为题写一篇文章。

要求:

1. 简单介绍自己(可包括年龄、性格、最喜欢的学科、学习类型、爱好、未来梦想和计划等);

2. 叙述自己初来高中的感受和体会(老师、同学、课程难易、对学校的印象、高中三年的计划等)。

3. 词数80左右。

参考范文

My new life in senior high school

I’m Li Hua, a Grade 10 student in No.1 senior high school of Chengde county. I’m a positive person, so you will neversee me withouta smiling face双重否定=肯定. In addition, I’m crazy abouttravelling, through whichI can learn about various cultures and make more friends. (定从)

It has been a week since I came here.I was a little awkward and frightenedat first but I adaptto (适应)my school life soon. I find it difficult to keep up with others in maths class, which makes me upset and frustrated.(定语从句)However, teachers and classmates are friendly and they helpme concentrate on my study. I believe I will make new friends and there is a lot to explore at senior high.There is no doubt thatI will be more confident and be well prepared formy university.(名词性从句)

* 黄色部分为仿写课文句型,蓝色字体为从句,蓝绿色字体为固定句式或搭配。

Unit 1 Teenage Life

导语:

Good habits formed at youth make all the difference.

青少年时养成的好习惯让人终身受益。

— Aristotle

—— 亚里士多德

仿写

Good booksread at youth makeall the difference.

Listening and Speaking

1.The early bird catches the worm.

早起的鸟儿有虫吃/捷足先登。

2.Always prepare for a rainy day.

未雨绸缪。

*a rainy day 不如意的日子;穷困的日子

*save/keep money for a rainy day 未雨绸缪;有备无患

仿写

Feeling proud, she had saved some money for a rainy day.

3. Actions speak louder than words.

行胜于言。(A胜于B)

仿写

Practice speaks louder than theory.

Advantages speak louder than disadvantages.

4. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。

仿写

All study and no think makes you a dull boy.

Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.

5.Distance tests a horse’s strength. Time reveals a person’s character.

路遥知马力,日久见人心。(名+动+名)

Reading and Thinking

1.Going from junior high school to senior high school is a really big challenge.

从初中过渡到高中确实是一项巨大的挑战。

仿写

Being from a student to a teacher is a really big challenge.

Going from school to company is a really big challenge.

2. My adviser recommended that I should sign up for advanced literature because I like English and I’m good at it.

指导老师建议我选修高级文学,因为我喜欢英语而且成绩不错。

本句为虚拟语气,recommend that sb (should) do sth 句式适用于建议信。

仿写

I recommend that you (should) turn to your experienced teachers for help. = What is strongly recommended/suggested is that you (should) turn to your experienced teachers for help.

I recommend that you find your way in style.(2017全国 I 卷七选五)

3. I’m a bit worried about keeping up with the other students in my advanced course, and it’ll be quite difficult to get used to all the homework.

我有点担心在高级课程上跟不上其他同学,而且要适应所有的作业也不容易。

* I’m a bit worried about ... and and it’ll be quite difficult to do ... 句型适用于求助信,比如2020全国Ⅲ卷,请外教帮忙指导你和同学改编的短剧;2011全国I卷暑期课程遇困难,向学校辅导中心求助,都可以用到这样的句式。

Reading for Writing

高一月考试题

李华和外国朋友David因为一件小事争吵导致关系破裂,他感到非常后悔,不想失去这个朋友。你作为李华的朋友,给他写一封建议信。

内容包括:

①给予安慰;

②给出建议。

Dear Li Hua,

I’m sorry to know that your best friend and you broke up because of a small thing, whichyou deeply regret.(定语从句)

I understand quite well that you are upset and want to makeit up. (宾语从句)I recommend thatyou take the first step actively.(宾语从句)It is not unusual for teenagers of our ageto have disagreements. But don’t let them destroy your relationship. So I think you should be the first to reach out the hand of friendship and break the ice. I am surehe will be more thanglad to accept you from the bottom of his heart.(宾语从句)

All the best.

Spendingtoo much time online isunhealthy and makes itvery difficult to focus on other things in life.

花费太多时间上网有损健康,也会让你们很难把精力放在生活中的其他事情上。

仿写

Spendingmore time on reading isbeneficial and makes itvery helpful to broaden your knowledge.

(图片为我给学生布置的作业,要求学生根据前两个单元的单词,自己创设语境进行free writing。这种写作方式既能帮助学生学以致用,又能帮助学生复习巩固所学知识。)

Unit 2 Travelling Around

导语:

Travel, in the younger sort, is a part of education; in the elder, a part of experience.

旅行,对年轻人来说,是教育的一部分;对年长者而言,则是一种经历。

— Francis Bacon

——弗朗西斯·培根

此句仿写可以把 travel 替换为 reading, voluntary work 等词。

Listening and Speaking

1. A Traveller without observation is a bird without wings. — Moslih Eddin Saadi

不会观察的旅行者,犹如没有翅膀的鸟。(强调观察对旅行者的重要性)

仿写

A man without dreams is a bird without wings.强调梦想对人的重要性

A man without aims is a sailor without compass.(强调目标对人的重要性

2. I see my path, but I don’t know where it leads. Not knowing where I’m going is what inspires me to travel it.

— Rosalia de Castro

我看到我脚下的路,但我不知道它通向哪里。就因为不知道我要去哪里,才激励我去旅行。

仿写

Not knowing what to do, I wandered across the streets aimlessly.

Reading and Thinking

You can then spendthree days exploringthe rainforest witha local guide and enjoyingthe plants and animals (that are) unique tothe rainforest.

然后你可以在当地导游的陪同下,花三天的时间深入雨林进行探索,欣赏雨林特有的动植物。

仿写

We spent years exploring ways to work out the problems with experts offering guidance unique to our research.

Unit 3 Sports and Fitness

导语:

All sports for all people.

全民体育运动。

Pierre de Coubertin

—皮埃尔·德·顾拜旦

仿写

All love for all people。

Reading and Thinking

1. As a player, Lang Ping brought honour and glory to her country. As a coach, she led the China women’s volleyball team to medals at world championships and the Olympics. As a person, Lang Ping is loved by fans at home and abroad.

作为一名运动员,郎平为她的祖国赢得了诸多荣誉。作为一名教练,她带领中国女子排球队在世界锦标赛和奥运会赛场上屡获殊荣。作为个人,郎平深受国内外球迷的喜爱。

仿写

As a player, Lionel Messi brought honour and glory to his country. As a captain, he led his teammates to FIFA World Cup Trophy. As a person, Lionel Messi is loved by fans at home and abroad.

2. Losing two important playerswas a big challenge, but Lang Ping did not lose heart. (动名词)

损失两大主力队员,是个巨大的挑战,但是郎平没有气馁。

仿写

Making breakfast was a big challenge, but they didn’t lose heart.(2021新高考I卷,为妈妈做早餐)

3. When Michael Jordan’s feet left the ground, time seemed to stand still.

当迈克尔•乔丹双脚离地的那一瞬间,时间似乎都凝固了。

这句话体现出乔丹球技精湛,stand 为系动词,sit,lie,go,run 等动词也可作系动词)

仿写

When Lionel Messi kicked the ball, time seemed to stand still.

When he delivered a speech, time seemed to stand still.

4. The player who became known as “Air Jordan” changed basketball with his graceful moves and jumps.

这位被称为“飞人乔丹”的球员用他那优雅的动作和跳跃改变了篮球运动。

仿写

The teacher, Zhang Guimei ,who became titled as “Role Model of the Times” changed many girls’ destinies with her selfless devotion and continuous efforts.

5. Jordan’s skills were impressive, but the mental strength that he showed made him unique.

乔丹的球技令人赞叹,然而他所展示的精神力量使他成为一名独一无二的球星。

仿写

Steel leg girl’s achievements were impressive, but the positive attitude that she had made her unique.

(钢腿女孩,在汶川地震中丧失右腿,一直自强不息,今年以四川省人大代表身份亮相大众)

6. The Boys and Girls Club which he started in Chicago has been helping young people since 1996.

他在芝加哥创建的“男孩女孩俱乐部”,从1996年至今一直在帮助年轻人。

仿写

The project which we launched in our school has been helping needy students since 2000.

Unit 4 Natural Disasters

导语:

Live to Tell: Raising Awareness, Reducing Mortality.

用生命呼吁:增强减灾意识,减少人员伤亡。

United Nations International Strategy for Disaster Reduction

——联合国国际减灾战略

Reading and Thinking

1.拟人修辞的运用

THE NIGHT THE EARTH DIDN’T SLEEP

地球的不眠之夜

Slowly, the city began to breathe again.

慢慢地,这座城市又开始恢复了生机。

仿写

This Sunday saw the thrilling and impressive competition held by our school with the intention of improving our reading ability. = This Sunday made a perfect day to hold a thrilling and impressive competition with the intention of improving our reading ability.

2. Mice ran out of the fields looking for places to hide, and fish jumped out of the water. (现在分词短语做伴随状语)

老鼠跑到田外,寻找藏身之所;鱼儿也跳出水面。

仿写

He stood still, wondering whether he was right or not.

3. Everywhere survivors looked, there was nothing but ruins.

幸存者目及之处无一不是废墟,万物尽毁。

仿写

Everywhere we looked, there was nothing but books.

Reading for Writing

The most powerful earthquake in the past 40 years caused a tsunami that crashed into coastlines across Asia yesterday, killing more than 6,500 people in Indonesia, India, Thailand, Malaysia, and at least four other countries.

昨日,40年来最为强烈的地震引发海啸,重创亚洲沿海地带,造成印度尼西亚、印度、泰国、马来西亚和至少其他四个国家的6,500多人死亡。

仿写

The terrible earthquake crashed into Asia, killing more than 6,500 people.

Unit 5 Languages Around the World

导语:

One language sets you in a corridor for life. Two languages open every door along the way.

一门语言能带你进入人生旅途,两门语言则为你开启人生旅途中的所有大门。

— Frank Smith

—— 弗兰克·史密斯

Reading and Thinking

1. The high regard for the Chinese writing system can be seen in the development of Chinese characters as an art form, known as Chinese calligraphy, which has become an important part of Chinese culture.

中国人对其书写体系推崇备至,这体现在汉字发展为一种艺术形式——书法。书法已成为中国文化的一个重要组成部分。

(the high regard for sth can be seen in 人们对……的高度重视可在……中看到

仿写

The high regard for environmental protection can be seen in saving water and electricity.

2.As China plays a greater role in global affairs, an increasing number of international students are beginning to appreciate China’s culture and history through this amazing language.

随着中国在全球事务中发挥更大的作用,越来越多的国际学生开始通过汉语这一奇妙的语言了解和欣赏中国的文化和历史。

an increasing number of+名词复数= more and more +名词复数,越来越多的人……

仿写

As technology plays a greater role in economic development, an increasing number of countries are beginning to develop science and technology.

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