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2011年04月12日17:05

  My understandings about volunteer work

  罗智圆

  四川省成都市成都实验外国语学校2011级9班

  Nowadys, more and more voluntary organzations exist in the world. Worldwide Red Cross and Red Crescent is the most famous one. It was established in 1863 by a Swiss bussinessman after he had witnessed the appalling casualties of wars who simply died from lack of medical services. In addition, the volunteers in the May 12 earthquake and the 2008 Beijing Olympics have touched people ou over the world. Their spirrt of bravery and sacrifice as well as love, have been branded on people's mind. In my opinion, volunteer work is a kind of thing that we can't ignore and it will definitely take a more active pant in the word in many aspects in the future.

  First of all, volunteer work promote the well-beings of individuals. It helps the victims of wars, earthquakes, colcanic erruptions and so on. Victims in the disasters no longer worry that they may die from lack of care. Volunteers also bring love and respect to the victims and they'll reassure the victims and help the victims regain the courage to suruive. On the other hand, volunteer work also prouide precious opportunities for volunteers so that they will meet more people, know more about the would and obtain more experionces.

  Secondly, volunteer work also do good to families. Many families are apart in course of the disasters. Wife missed her husband and children missed their father. They will feel lonely and hapeless and they'll lose hope in life. It is holpful that volunteers accompany them and reassure them. With a lot of people surrounding them and helping them, they will feel they are loved and have the courage to continue the life and reconstruct family.

  Thirdly, volunteer work also has a good effect on communities and the world. In May 12 earthquake and Beijing Olympics, volunteers have set a great example. In the 2008 Beijing Olympics, volunteers help visitors find the way to statiums and hotels. They always greet visitors with a beautiful smile. Victors who have been to Beijing applaud for their patience and elegance. They pass the philosophy to communities and the world in action: “One world, one dream. If everyone gives a hand to person in need, the world will become more beautiful.” Many people elevote their lives to voluntary work and they represent the highest level of moral conduct of human beings. I believe that more and more people will join the volunteer work. It is encouraging to think that voluntary organizations like the Red Cross and Red crescent exist and are dedicated to peace and hospmony.

  If we have faith in ourselves, no mountain is too high to climb. One of the greatest achievements in life is to do what people think you can't do. Although we face a lot of severe problems such as environment. Conflicts. lack of recources and natural disasters, with the colinteer work existing, we still have a bright future.

  专家点评:该生语言组织较为紧密,逻辑比较缜密,用词和句型都比较高级,但是拼写和语法上面还有待修炼,而且尤其要杜绝中式英语问题。

  专家建议:中式英语是以汉语思维方式为出发点,用英汉词典上的单一词义,根据英语语法编造出来的英语句子。中国式英语在中国人之间可以勉强沟通思想,但是在以英语为母语的国家或人群中无法使用,或不能被接受。中国式英语在使用英语的中国人中普遍存在。我们在学习时一定要杜绝“望文生义”,“一词一义”,“直接翻译”等固有的思维模式,多看看经典的英语文章,会对我们的学习大有益处。

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