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第八届全国创新英语作文大赛优胜作文选登

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2011年04月12日17:05

  The volunteer work,the great work

  刘晓菲

  山东省胶南市第一中学高三19班

  Dear little cousin.

  I'm glad to receive a letter from you. You mentioned that you wanted to being a volunteer, eagerly, who is always energetic, glamouvous and able to have close connections with something really “big”. But do you at all understand the whole meaning of being a volunteer? Have you ever thought about volunteer work's greatness to the world around?

  Volunteer work is more than “good-looking”, as you mentioned. It means commitment, enthusiasim from the bottom of heart and responsibility. Never have you seen a volunteer complain much, right? Those volunteers, especially who participated the vesuce work of the May 12 earthquake, donated all their time and energy to the great volunteer work, some of which might be dangerous and tiresome. Even some senior high, just the same age as me, volunteered to “fight the battle”, which made me ashame of myself, for I could have done the same but I didn't.

  Meanuhile, volunteer work, because of its greatness, is important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communitives and world at large. In this busy, modern society, people rush for almost everything. But few people'd stop and think about how life should go on. Too busy are we that we lose the sense of connection with families, communities, the world and even our true selves. Volunteer work gives us a chance to be real human being. Loosened from day-to-day routine, we are more likely to act like a cell of this beautiful world. Thus, all things, like families, communities, world and indiciduals will be konded together to work for “the Greater Good”.

  My little cousin, I do hope my words will make you twely understant volunteer work, for it is such great work, full of commitment, value and responsibility.

  Yours.

  Care-for-you Cousin

  专家建议:

  提高写作的方式除了平时大量的阅读,更多的依赖于练习,如果平时不怎么练笔,在正式写的时候最容易出现具有中国特色的表达,感觉像是用中文翻译过来的。所以建议考生每周坚持写一些自己比较感兴趣的东西,提高写作能力。

  专家点评:

  这篇文章总体来说条理很清楚,可以看得出来,这位学生在短语句型方面积累了不少,但是需要注意的是口语表达和书面书还是有一定差别的,有些口语的句子在书面语当中并不多用,甚有时是禁用的。

  

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