雅思写作必读：十大“见官死”开头典型案例

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　　典型失败案例： Topic 1－Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题

　　In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.

　　Topic 2－Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)

　　Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

　　Topic 3－The importance of environmental protection

　　Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!