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Part V
Writing（30 minutes）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an
open letter on behalf of the student union asking people to give help to a
student who is seriously ill. You should write at least 150 words following the
outline given below:
1. 对病人的简单介绍：目前的病情和家庭情况
2. 目前的困难：无法继续承担医疗费用,需要护理
3. 希望捐助,联系方式
【范文】
Your Help Needed
Jan. 8, 2005
Dear fellow students,
We are the staff from the student union. We have sad news for you. One of
our classmates is suffering from blood cancer. Now, his state of illness is very
serious. He is in the isolated ward waiting for operation. His name is Wang
Ling, a senior majoring in Computer Science. He is a warm hearted guy and one of
the top students in his department. He comes from a poor urban family and both
of his parents are laid off workers, living on relief from the national
government.
His illness needs immediate surgery, and as you know the surgery fee is
astronomically high, up to 300,000 Yuan. Owing to his familys financial
condition, he could not afford it. And we also need hands to nurse him because
his parents are also in hospital after hit by the bad news.
So your helping hands are urgently needed. If you are willing to donate
money to him, please phone us at 139********, email us at studentunion@sina.com,
visit www.urheplp.com （the website we set up for him）or directly visit our
office. Millions of thanks for your loving hearts!
The Student Union
【点评】
本次作文对书信格式要求不是很严格,但考生必须写到提纲中的每一个要点（每缺少一个要点要扣去1分）
。 这种公开信的形式同学们可能还不很熟悉,正如笔者在考前新浪答疑时以及《创造闪光点,决胜四六级》一文中所述,模板很难找到用武之地（不像以前纯粹的议论文）
,题目也往往与大学校园生活密切相关。这就更加要求同学们加强语言基本功的培养,尽量多掌握一些重要的单词、短语、句型。希同学们仔细揣摩并掌握本篇范文中的表达方式。
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