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考研作文指南:“三步成文”法示范
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  如此将文中用词悉心打磨一番之后,文章何愁不大放异彩?“三步成文”之后,我们可见文章全貌了。

  范文1

  Nowadays there is much discussion as to the phenomenon that families are now not as close as they used to be. This is indeed a problem that we should not neglect any more.

  There are many reasons that have caused this problem. In the first place, nowadays many children have to leave their parents at an early age to study or work elsewhere. As a result, as time passes, children become emotionally estranged from their parents. Secondly, compared with the past, social competition is becoming increasingly fierce. People are urged to concentrate their efforts upon work. Consequently, they can’t afford to spend their spare time with their families. The importance of bonds of kinship is gradually fading from their minds. What is more, the availability of various kinds of recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with their family members. Their spare time is mostly occupied by watching TV, surfing the internet or playing video games.

  From what has been discussed above, we may see that it is time for us to take measures to prevent such family alienation. The first step is that family members living away from one another should ensure regular contact by phone or letter. And then for those living together, it is a good idea to take some time off work or recreation periods to spend more time with each other. Finally, a close family relationship can surely be maintained as long as we realize the significant role it plays in our lives and attach importance to it.

  To summarize, the alienation of family members has caused public attention. And we should take effective measures suggested to prevent it.

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  下面我们把刚才的基本模板——模板1改头换面,看如何选句选词构造出一个新的模板。

  首段引出现象,模板1中用的是Nowadays there is much discussion as to…This is indeed a problem that we should not neglect any more.同为现象句,现在我们换用另外一句可以达到同样效果的句子Recently one phenomenon has aroused wide concern, and that is…

  第二段分析原因,我们可以将首句中的单词reason换成词组account for,接着将几个时间顺序词In the first place, Secondly, What is more换成Firstly, Secondly, And also等作用相同的词。

  第三段解决方案,模板1的句型是From what has been discussed above, we may see that it is time for us to…我们可以采用一种更委婉的总起句Then what should we do to prevent the worsening of this problem? This is no easy task, but some solutions may be very helpful.在具体列出解决方案时,模板1用的顺序词是The first step should be that, And then, Finally,模板2换用成in the first place, And at the same time, Furthermore。

  第四段总结全文,模板1中概括再次问题,用的句型是To summarize, …has already caused public attention. And we should take effective measures suggested above to…现在我们换用句型Following these recommendations, we are sure that…,强调解决方案的可行性。

  这样,一个全新的模板2就呈现在我们面前了,其文章结构与模板1同出一辙,但模板中的关键句型皆变了脸。

  模板2

考研作文指南:'三步成文'法示范

  范文2

  Recently one phenomenon has aroused wide concern, and that is families are now not as close as they used to be.

  Several factors should account for this problem. Firstly, nowadays many children have to leave their parents at an early age to study or work elsewhere. As a result, as time passes, children become emotionally estranged from their parents. Secondly, compared with the past, social competition is becoming increasingly fierce. People are urged to concentrate their efforts upon work. Consequently, they can't afford to spend their spare time with their families. The importance of bonds of kinship is gradually fading from their minds. And also the availability of various kinds of recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with their family members. Their spare time is mostly occupied by watching TV, surfing the internet or playing video games.

  Then what should we do to prevent the worsening of this problem? This is no easy task, but some solutions may be very helpful. In the first place, family members living away from one another should ensure regular contact by phone or letter. And at the same time, for those living together, it is a good idea to take some time off work or recreation periods to spend more time with each other. Furthermore, a close family relationship can surely be maintained as long as we realize the significant role it plays in our lives and attach importance to it.

  Following these recommendations, we are sure that we may prevent the worsening of family relationship.

  在第二篇中我们为考生们总结了大量的与模板结构相关的句型和词汇,这就意味着考生有太多的选择去排列组合这些句型和词汇,替换最初的基本模板,从而构建出数以百计的个性化模板。

  现在我们再沿用模板2的替换构建方式,再造一个新的模板。

  模板3

  
考研作文指南:'三步成文'法示范

  范文3

  In the past few years, there is an obvious tendency that families are now not as close as they used to be, which deserves our attention.

  It is easy to identify some reasons for this problem. The most direct one is that nowadays many children have to leave their parents at an early age to study or work elsewhere. As a result, as time passes, children become emotionally estranged from their parents. Then, compared with the past, social competition is becoming increasingly fierce. People are urged to concentrate their efforts upon work. Consequently, they can't afford to spend their spare time with their families. The importance of bonds of kinship is gradually fading from their minds. Additionally, the availability of various kinds of recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with their family members. Their spare time is mostly occupied by watching TV, surfing the internet or playing video games.

  Fortunately, more and more people begin realizing this tendency, but realization is not enough. What is more urgent is to take some effective actions. First of all, family members living away from one another should ensure regular contact by phone or letter. Secondly, for those living together, they should take some time off work or recreation periods to spend more time with each other. In the end, a close family relationship can surely be maintained as long as we realize the significant role it plays in our lives.

  From the analysis above, we can see that it is high time that we took some quick and effective measures suggested here to prevent the loosening of family ties.

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  结束语:从素材丰富的模板、句型、词汇工具箱中取出不同的工具,我们就可以组合成不同的文章。考生们只需稍做一下排列组合,就会得到几十篇甚至上百篇不同的作文。开动你们的脑筋吧!可以到考研之友将我们的模版继续,还有更多组合吗?

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